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Urho nodded to Kiri and Kala, but said nothing about their adventure.
He sat by the fire, seemed deep in thought for a few moments and then
finally started to speak.
“I have a story to tell”, he said, “but this is not one of the
old stories. It is something I just heard from the traders of the
south.
“Every once in a while they visit a village in the far south. The
people there have a different language to ours and these traders have
learned enough words to make simple trades with them. Because of the
difficulty of their language the traders rarely visit them and know
very little about them. Every once in a while these foreign people
obtain unusual things from far away, further than we have traveled.
They say they come from lands that surround another sea, a place
where the snow never falls and it is summer the year round.
“As they had not visited these people for a long while they made
the long journey to see what new things they might have. As they
approached their village from the sea, they saw something that they
could not explain. The village lay desolate and burned. There was no
one there. They landed and walked around the ruined village. We have
all seen how lightning can sometimes strike and burn down a house,
and sometimes the fire will spread if the houses are close to each
other. This was not what had happened there. There were no burn marks
between the remains of the houses. Each house seemed to have been set
on fire deliberately.
“One of the traders was familiar with the Oneness and he entered
their stone circle to see what he could feel. When he came back he
said that he felt feelings of horror and disbelief, He said that the
circle was filled with this feeling. He could not offer any other
information than that. They all became very scared and decided that
they should go back to their boat and sail back home. They could not
explain what they had seen, but felt that they should tell other
villages of their experience with the hopes that perhaps someone
could offer an explanation.”
Urho stopped speaking and looked at everyone. Vara’s brow was
furrowed and she started to speak:
“As you all know, we sometimes abandon a village for a better site
elsewhere. It might be because the fish moved from the area, or the
game, or it might be because of changes in the weather that made our
fields unproductive. Sometimes it seems that the soil just gets tired
of producing our food and we need to leave it to recover. Whenever
this happens we all just leave the houses as they are. There is no
need to destroy them and they might provide a night’s shelter for
travelers on a long journey.
“Once though, when I was a young girl, a strange thing happened to
a village down the coast from us. The village made use of the huge
numbers of shellfish and it was their main food supply. There were a
few strange tides one year and the shellfish grew fewer in number.
Not only that, but also many people who ate them became very ill. I
remember a few even died. The village decided that they should find
another home, they thought that the sea around their village had
become tired just like an old field. Someone suggested that if they
left the village just as it was, other people might come, eat the
shellfish there and become ill as well. So they decided to burn all
of the roofs to act as a signal that this was not a good place to
stay. Perhaps this is what happened to the village you speak of. I
cannot think of any other possible explanation.”
Urho nodded, “That sounds like what might have happened in this
case”, he said. I will go back to the house by the dock and tell
them. Several of us went through the village asking for any
explanations and we agreed to share whatever we heard with these
traders. They are very upset with what happened and are asking
everyone they know to explain it to them. There is just one thing,
though”
He reached into his leather bag and pulled out a stone arrowhead.
“The traders found a number of these lying about the place.” he
passed the arrowhead around and they all looked at it. A few others
had joined them and they, too, took a look.
“You see how different is from our arrowheads”, Urho said, “there
are two sharp points that are set backwards. This shape makes no
sense. If it became embedded in an animal it would be very difficult
to pull it out again. Also, why would they use such things in a
village? There is nothing to hunt there.”
The arrowhead had been passed to Vara. She held it in her hand,
frowned, shuddered and quickly passed it back to Urho. He noticed her
reaction.
“Did you think of something Vara?” he said.
“No, it’s nothing, just a crazy thought that is not worth
repeating”
Urho seemed satisfied with this explanation and Vara smiled at
everyone, but Kiri knew his aunt very well and could read in her face
that something was troubling her deeply. He had seen that same
expression back in his village when his aunt had told him of her
worries that one day no one would be able to find the quietness of
the circle for others, and again, in the long voyage when he had seen
the Great Serpent fleeing in a vision and he had told her about it.
He decided that he would question her about this during his next
lesson. He thought that he had many questions for her this time and
he could hardly wait to tell her about how he had found Kala by
creating a circle in his mind and coming in to touch with the Oneness
that connected all things.
“I’ll get back to the traders then”, Urho said. “they want to
leave soon and get back home. I am glad to see you back safe and
sound Kiri. You can tell us of your adventure tonight.”
He left the house and the others that had stopped to listen started
to go about what they had been doing before. Soon, only Kiri, Kala
and Vara remained seated around the fire.
Kiri could not wait for his lesson to question his aunt, besides, he
had many other things to discuss with her.
“You saw something when you held that arrowhead didn’t you Aunt
Vara” He set his jaw in the most determined way he could muster. He
wanted his aunt to understand that he would not be put off so easy as
Urho. She glanced at Kala, who was also looking at her intently,
possibly following Kiri’s lead.
“I’m not sure this is the place to discuss such things,” Vara
said.
“If you are worried about letting Kala hear about this, I should
tell you that what you tell me, you can tell her. I am sure that we
are a pair”
Kala blushed, smiled and lowered her eyes in shyness.
“Well, well!” Vara said, and looked at them both. She saw the
determinism in Kiri’s eyes and the joy in Kala’s. Vara smiled.
“You might well be right Kiri. You are different now from when you
left. I can sense something. I will accept what you tell me. Do you
feel the same Kala?”
“Yes I do, Aunt Vara.”
Vara smiled when she heard Kala call her Aunt Vara.
“Well well!” she said again.
“What I have to tell you must go no further. For once Kala, you
must keep a secret. Promise me that you will never tell anyone what I
am about to reveal to you.”
“I will.”
“Good. All things can reveal their purpose if you look at them
carefully enough and free your mind from what you think you know
about everything. You know how our arrows are shaped like a willow
leaf? The bows are powerful, and this shape allows the arrow to reach
the heart of the animal with ease and bring it down. When we recover
the arrow, although it has penetrated deeply, it comes out with ease.
The arrow that Urho showed us would not come out easily. It would rip
and tear the flesh around it and catch on bones. We would often have
to cut into the flesh to free such an arrow. The deer that you hunt
has no hands as we do. They cannot pull out an arrow that has hit
them. If the arrow misses a vital spot or just nicks them at the
wrong angle, it might fall to the ground, but we know that the deer
can travel very far before becoming weak from such a wound. We would
let fly another arrow and be more careful that it should hit its
mark. That arrow was used against a prey that had hands to pull it
out. It was used against people.”
Kiri and Kala both looked at Vara with an expression of disbelief.
Kiri spoke:
“That doesn’t make any sense Aunt Vara. How hungry would you have
to be to hunt people? Everywhere we know there are animals and fish,
and we grow grain and vegetables, collect shellfish from the beach
and eat berries from the edge of the forest. If food is in short
supply we can always trade things with others from far away just as
the Danai came to our village with their wood when they suffered from
a poor crop last year.”
Vara sighed. “No Kiri, the arrows were not used to hunt people like
game. They were used to kill for no other purpose than to kill”
“I have seen people get very angry before” Kiri said, “and
sometimes even hit another, but anyone seeing this soon comes along
to stop it and solve the difficulty. It is usually because someone
didn’t understand something. Anger never lasts very long. It is not
our way. We are all part of the Oneness, we are all connected. We
help each other in times of difficulty. How could one group of people
all be angry enough with another group of people to want them all to
die. Why would such arrows be made?”
Kala started to shake and tears welled in her eyes.
“This is like a bad dream, but we are not going to wake up and
realize that and laugh about it. If there are people out there who
would kill other people then our bad dreams have followed us into the
world. It scares me. I don’t understand. This can’t be real. No
dream is that bad. It can’t be true, surely.”
Kiri put his arms around her and Vara tried to comfort her.
“This happened a long way from us. We have nothing to fear here and
now. I know it is an absurd thing and it makes no sense to us, but it
must make some sense to these people. We have to find out what is
happening and see if we can put a stop to it. Perhaps they all ate
something that made them ill in their minds. There are plants that
can make people believe that what is not real is real. Perhaps that
is all there is to it.”
Kala began to calm down a little, but she was still trembling. Vara
looked worried.
“Perhaps we should not speak of this thing any more.”
“No”, Kala said, I can see that Kiri wants to discuss it more. I
was being silly. It was just as if I had a bad dream while I was
awake. I’ll be alright. Sometimes I just allow myself to feel what
others feel. I imagined all of those poor people being killed with
arrows and not understanding why. It just became too much for me.”
“No Kala, there are things that I must tell Kiri during his lesson
this afternoon. It will be too upsetting for you. If you and Kiri
want to talk about these things later, that will be for you both to
decide upon once I have given Kiri this lesson. I didn’t want to
discuss these things yet, but it seems that its time has come before
I expected it. Now go and find something pleasant to do you two.
Kiri, come back here in a while, once Kala is back to her happy self
again. If we have enough time we will talk again”.
Kiri led Kala out of the house, his arm around her shoulders, and
Vara was left to her own thoughts.
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Again a dark moment has come to the forefront of the story. The bad dream Kiri had on his journey to the Danai village shows the spiritual information of the foreshadowing events to come. Kirk has changed, he senses something evil is coming to their world that will destroy the Oneness which keeps them all connected. He asks himself the question "How could one group of people be so angry enough with another group to want them all die?"
ReplyDeleteWho are these evil people who only want to destroy others?
Why do they way to destroy the peacefulness of others?
In our time, we take too much for granted. Kiri and his people have only their own experiences they can draw from. It's not easy, but they start to understand certain things better than we do, today. When things are taken for granted no one ever thinks about them.Kiri begins to understand that he has a great quest ahead of him.
DeleteThose who take things for granted usually end up not being able to handle difficulties when they arise. Kirk realizes he will require the help of his aunt to prepare him to use the Oneness to overcome the challenges that lie ahead.
ReplyDeleteYes, and Kala's role becomes clearer as the story progresses.There are also encounters with people from very different cultures and from another part of the world, we would call them "advanced", but are they really?
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